Thursday, September 3, 2009

What I Love About You


I love the way my body reacts to your name
I love the way i get excited when you call
I love the way you make me laugh
I love the way you encourage me to remain strong
I love the way you get concerned when things go wrong
I love the way i sleep like a baby after talking to you
I love the way you make sure that we talk or sms
I love the way you prefer me to them all
I love the way you leave me speechless
But mostly I love the way you confess your love to me....
It leaves a smile on my face.....always.

© gladys wanjiku

***A reply to james wamathai's poem 'What i Hate About You"

14 comments:

Cizoe said...

aw..........this is so sweet.....it reminds me of someone who loves me....it makes me feel so good......mwah....

Gabbie said...

Nice piece, guess had a meaning and purpose. keep writting.

Amani said...

Love put in simple english. reminds me of someone i loved trully.

Anonymous said...

Great, That's a wonderful poem. It expreses compliments...But 'I' is a proper noun so It should be capital through out...refer to lines 2 and 6 please. Mundia Joe Santos

Gabbie said...

Mundia Joe...the poem was written by someone who was high on something....lets call it looooove...

Wamathai said...

@Thelma: Its good that you can relate
@Gabbie: Thanks, thanks. I shall.
@Amani: Ur desription is spot on.
@Mundia: THank you for the compliment. I hv noted the other bit.

doreen chumi said...

Mda, that is really something.true as love itself.

shawn said...

nice piece Jamo!

Wamathai said...

@Doreen: That is quite a compliment, thank u.
@Shawn: Thanks sana my guy

Cous Cous said...

Wonderful....!

Wamathai said...

@Elle: Y thank u

Anonymous said...

i wish i had someone to tell these words to.

paje said...

I love the way you write..

Anonymous said...

This is beautiful. I love the simplicity and honesty of it.

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