He had cute brown eyes and a wonderful smile
When he looked at me my heart would melt
I used to see him at the bus stop every morning
he looked like he was interested but never said hello
I tried to passing him subtle messages to show him
That I was also interested but he didn’t seem to get the hint.
One day I saw him at the local hanging out with his friends
and I decided to take matters into my own hands
I had drunk a few and it gave me courage
I walked up to where he was and kissed him
my stunt worked because we are now dating
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9 comments:
r u gay?
@Anonymous: No, its written from a woman's point of view.
Omg,u lyk chopped three quarters out o "my" story..true story..hehehe.js continue it kidogo,its beautiful bt too brief
@Njeri: I like that u can relate. About makin it longer, i'll see what i can do.
Your poetry is amazing, just discovered your blog from zuqka and decided to check it out...amazing
@Tanya: Thank you, you are far too kind..
Yeah - it better be from a girl's point of view ... you never know though. Great poetry!
@gmeltdown: It was but clearly someone thought it wasn't. Thanks.
I randomly kissed someone like that,well am embarrassed to date, i was high but hey that's a great piece :-) Ur style is simplicity, i dig that :-)
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