Monday, September 7, 2009

Karma

When you were cheating on me
I was looking for ways to make our relationship better

When I found out and confronted you
You were unconcerned and unapologetic

When u were leaving me for him
I was still clinging to hope that you would change

When you were starting to have problems
I was meeting someone new

When you discovered that he was cheating
I was already two weeks into my relationship

When you caught him with another woman
I was getting engaged

When he was leaving you
I was getting married

© james wamathai 2009

11 comments:

Lauryn Awuor said...

So creative, a lovely love poem. Its so cute. Good job!

Cizoe said...

Lovely poem..........awesome and straight to the point.........so true........so true....

Cuza said...

Ths z great,vry touchy.

Wamathai said...

@Lauryn: I appreciate the compliment.
@Thelma: Am glad u like it n that u can relate.
@Cuza: Thanks, thanks

Mama said...

Oh my! That is sad if tiz true...I loved it.

Wamathai said...

@Mama: Its based on real events but i tweaked it a bit to make things interesting.

tony thuo said...

Karma nice work kizee Im feelin it!

Wamathai said...

@ Tony:Thanks,thanks..

ellina said...

Nice one :)

Wamathai said...

@Ellina: Y thank u :)

AKenyanGirl said...

Straight and to the point! Good one.

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